DOSTI

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Dosti dhoop si, kaheen bhi chamakti hai

Dosti baarish si, kisiko bhigo sakti hai




Koodti phirti rehti hai dosti

Kabhi dilon ke beech aati hai dosti

Ek anjaana sa karwaan hai

Idhar, udhar, ruk jaati hai jahaan hai

Kabhi phir pet gudgudaati hai

Pairon mey bhinbhinaati hai

Aankhon mey phadphadaati hai

Kaanon mey jhanjhanaati hai



Par dosti hamari hai

Humse pyaar karti hai

Hamare dil mey rehti hai

Ajnabi ko yaar karti hai




Dosti dhoop si, kaheen bhi chamakti hai

Dosti baarish si, kisiko bhigo sakti hai




Comments

sufiyana said…
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July 29, 2008 at 9:23 AM
sufiyana said…
was reading DOSTI ..... just a suggestion .............with a little play of words can be changed into a lovely ghazal ...I am no authority but ...ijazat ho to...
July 30, 2008 at 8:09 PM
Anonymous said…
Bahot khub lagi Dosti mere Dost....simple but expressive composition!
July 30, 2008 at 10:36 PM
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