Unki judai bhi humein bohot pyaar karti hai Unki yaad humein bohot bekarar karti hai Yaad aye jo sath guzare wo din talaash ye nazaar bar bar karti hai
woman, i had no idea ur urdu is this good! I dont understand quite a bit of it, but have loved a few of them a lot. excellent stuff here, gunjan. a very very pleasant surprise.
shariq - yay:)thanks for ur poetry, aap bhi shaayar ban jaao ab:)do keep visiting
aparna - thx:)even i had no clue, that if i start writing, m gonna enjoy this so much:)zank u for the appreciation:)o keep visiting
gags:)thank u:)thank u:) thank u:)o keep visiting
seemant - aapko bhi bahut thanx:)o keep visiting
arani:)thanx for the appreciation -yes m looking at a few publishers, have sent a few sample pieces to them - lets hope their response is positive:)do wish me luck - n pls keep visiting:)
I remember home Ma Her chappals They were hers they were mine We wore them together, turn by turn Till those slabs of thin rubber took shape The ups and downs, the myriad contours of our feet… And then I left. Now only ma wears them. Her chappals They seem to have fondly changed shape They have comfortably fitted now, into her feet Because we don’t wear them anymore – only ma does. And sometimes now, when I go back home And sometimes when I wear her chappals, our chappals They don’t feel the same anymore. My feet They don’t feel the same at the heel They should be lower Just beneath the toe it used to be higher. And the rubber straps They don’t hold me so securely no longer They will never feel the same again. That is how they are Chappals They forget Only I remember. Only I know they will never be how they used to be Only I know nothing will ever be how it used to be Nothing, I know, nothing will ever be the same a...
meri ibaadat ne mujhe ek jahaan dikhaya ek se milaya, dooje ko dikhaya isne uthaya, usne giraaya kuch aise hi mujhe jeena sikhaya phir ibaadat ne mujhe ek aur jahaan sikhaya ke aankh jab khuli, to aaina dikhaya puri duniya mujh mey hi basi thhi mujhe ki mera sukoon banaya
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iss feelings go age lete hue ...
Unki judai bhi humein bohot pyaar karti hai
Unki yaad humein bohot bekarar karti hai
Yaad aye jo sath guzare wo din
talaash ye nazaar bar bar karti hai
Salaam
Shariq
i think u should get them published...
aparna - thx:)even i had no clue, that if i start writing, m gonna enjoy this so much:)zank u for the appreciation:)o keep visiting
gags:)thank u:)thank u:) thank u:)o keep visiting
seemant - aapko bhi bahut thanx:)o keep visiting
arani:)thanx for the appreciation -yes m looking at a few publishers, have sent a few sample pieces to them - lets hope their response is positive:)do wish me luck - n pls keep visiting:)