Unki judai bhi humein bohot pyaar karti hai Unki yaad humein bohot bekarar karti hai Yaad aye jo sath guzare wo din talaash ye nazaar bar bar karti hai
woman, i had no idea ur urdu is this good! I dont understand quite a bit of it, but have loved a few of them a lot. excellent stuff here, gunjan. a very very pleasant surprise.
shariq - yay:)thanks for ur poetry, aap bhi shaayar ban jaao ab:)do keep visiting
aparna - thx:)even i had no clue, that if i start writing, m gonna enjoy this so much:)zank u for the appreciation:)o keep visiting
gags:)thank u:)thank u:) thank u:)o keep visiting
seemant - aapko bhi bahut thanx:)o keep visiting
arani:)thanx for the appreciation -yes m looking at a few publishers, have sent a few sample pieces to them - lets hope their response is positive:)do wish me luck - n pls keep visiting:)
Is kadar, diwaan-e-aam mein badnaam na karo jaan Kucch izzat yahaan humaari bhi hai Kucch apni jaan humein pyaari bhi hai Ishaaron se bhi ishq bayaan hote hain Nazron ke bhi teer-kamaan hote hain Ye parde agar pad lo, ye izhaar agar sun lo To wo bhi mohabbat-e-shaan hote hain Inayat karo jaan pe apni, Kucch to socho hum kya kahenge Tumhaari ada-e-deewaangi ke peeche Jawaab-e-jaan kya denge Ki “Arre Naaz, bataya nahin kabhi, ek mohabbat tumhaari bhi hai?” 14 th Feb 2008
Muaafi de maula, mujhe muaafi de Mera ahem choor kar, mujhe muaafi de Main to hoon tera aam sa banda Itna ahem mujhme aaye kyun Jinse mohabbat hai mere dil ko itni Unhe mera dil sataye kyun Ye sawaal-o-sakht, ye shuba har waqt Is gard se mujhe rihaai de Paak kar de mera rooh -e-aaina Meri rooh mujhe zaahir dikhai de Muaafi de maula, mujhe muaafi de Aankhon mein tu hi dikhai de Muaafi de maula, mujhe muaafi de Meri muaafi ki bas duhaai de 2nd July 2008
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iss feelings go age lete hue ...
Unki judai bhi humein bohot pyaar karti hai
Unki yaad humein bohot bekarar karti hai
Yaad aye jo sath guzare wo din
talaash ye nazaar bar bar karti hai
Salaam
Shariq
i think u should get them published...
aparna - thx:)even i had no clue, that if i start writing, m gonna enjoy this so much:)zank u for the appreciation:)o keep visiting
gags:)thank u:)thank u:) thank u:)o keep visiting
seemant - aapko bhi bahut thanx:)o keep visiting
arani:)thanx for the appreciation -yes m looking at a few publishers, have sent a few sample pieces to them - lets hope their response is positive:)do wish me luck - n pls keep visiting:)