ZINDA RAHEGA USKA SHUKRAANA

Sanam na chaahe magar, mohabbat to karega deewana

Wo kaafir sahi, ya phir use ilm nahin


Fakat uski ek nazar se, mere samaeen

Tamaam ho jayega paagal, par zinda rahega uska shukraana


9th July 2008

Comments

Shariq said…
Khubsurat hai ...

iss feelings go age lete hue ...


Unki judai bhi humein bohot pyaar karti hai
Unki yaad humein bohot bekarar karti hai
Yaad aye jo sath guzare wo din
talaash ye nazaar bar bar karti hai

Salaam
Shariq
woman, i had no idea ur urdu is this good! I dont understand quite a bit of it, but have loved a few of them a lot. excellent stuff here, gunjan. a very very pleasant surprise.
Gargi said…
sufism at its best! good work girl!
seemant said…
wah wah !!! irshad irshad !!!
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arani said…
i must say is just loved it...have not read all but reading one by one slowly lingering over each...

i think u should get them published...
Gunjan Pai said…
shariq - yay:)thanks for ur poetry, aap bhi shaayar ban jaao ab:)do keep visiting

aparna - thx:)even i had no clue, that if i start writing, m gonna enjoy this so much:)zank u for the appreciation:)o keep visiting

gags:)thank u:)thank u:) thank u:)o keep visiting

seemant - aapko bhi bahut thanx:)o keep visiting

arani:)thanx for the appreciation -yes m looking at a few publishers, have sent a few sample pieces to them - lets hope their response is positive:)do wish me luck - n pls keep visiting:)

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